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maybe adding a sound fx in the form of a big jagged-edge word would do the trick to emphasize that she`s hungry. coz in the 2nd panel, she`s just saying what she is & curves signifying the movement of her stomach is just not enough to bring it out.

posted by Anonymous (Guest) on November 28th, 2010, 1:05 am



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No, the face is good, but her hands are miniscule compared to her head. It's fine for chibis, but it looks kinda weird on a normal person. Please know I'm just trying to be constructive! T.T I do like this, I do!

posted by DoB again (Guest) on March 28th, 2011, 1:34 pm



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